Extra Credit Reading Notes: Epified Mahabharata Section E

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Upon watching this last section of the Epified Mahabharata series, I was drawn to the battle between Shiva and Arjuna. Although I think this is a really tense fight that is really cool, I think it could be made to be even more awesome.

Shiva Reveals Himself to Arjuna (Source: wikimedia)

I think Shiva could get more angry, releasing godly attacks such that Arjuna is struck with awe. I want to make Arjuna beg at the feet of Shiva and promise to prove himself worthy. It would be cool to have Arjuna go and have to do various tasks to atone for his actions against the mighty Shiva.

It wouldn't be a huge difference from the original story but I think it would be a lot more intense and more enjoyable to read. The tension on whether or not Shiva would destroy Arjuna for attacking him so foolishly would have the reader on the edge of their seat.

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